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Jin - open play map

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Udunie
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Climate: Moderate
Difficulty: Normal
Minimap:
This is a medium sized map. Fishing, prey (and isolated predatory) animals and metals are available, no quarry or salt.
I'm very tentatively working on a campaign this would be a part of, but as it's my first map, I would really appreciate any feedback/concrit.
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Gweilo2
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I looked at your map in the editor. I like it, it has a 'natural' feel to it. There is nothing wrong with it, and it is quite playable as is, but here are a few comments that I feel could improve it:

1. Place a few 1x1 size rocks on the north edge of the map by the river and also on the south side of the map near the pond. Then place some 1x1 trees around these rocks. This will make a huge difference in the Feng Shui flexibility your map can provide.

2. Add one or two 1x1 size rocks near the prey spawn points located on the map edges. This will stop a player from accidentally placing a structure on top of the spawn point.

3. You left alot of 1 tile gaps between your rock formations and trees. Also I see these gaps between elevation changes and trees. Consider changing this to put the trees right up against the rocks and elevation changes. This provides much better Feng Shui flexibility.

4. Consider adding some beach tiles along your river. Of course this is optional, but it does add to the aesthetic look of large bodies of water.
Udunie
File Author
Gweilo, thank you so much for the tips!
Life is kicking my butt right now, but I will try to edit and reupload the map as soon as I can! (I'm a uncultured swine as far as Feng Shui is concerned, so I'm grateful for the pointers!)
Udunie
File Author
I've edited the map, do I resubmit it? I know there should be a update option for campaigns, but I can't see anything like that here...
Gweilo2
Staff
The 'Update' button is located just to the right of the 'Profile' button. Do you see it?
Udunie
File Author
Oh damn! Yes, sorry!

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Added:07/16/19
Updated:07/18/19